Shinsetsu Mahö Shöjo, traducido hasta el capítulo 18 de 51



Saludos, estas últimas semanas he avanzado hasta el capítulo 18. He tardado más que con los demás capítulos, ya que eran bastante largos, especialmente el 17.

También corregí multitud de faltas de ortografía en los primeros capítulos. La parte de la corrección se me está complicando por la falta de un corrector que revise.

Agradezco cualquier comentario, ya sea para corregirme o para compartir impresiones.

El enlace de descarga es el mismo en todos los posts.

Estoy traduciendo esta novela/srpg como pasatiempo, y porque me gustaría tener compañeros de la comunidad hispanohablante de lectores con los que hablar de ella. Por eso, agradecería cualquier comentario. Si no quieren hacerse cuenta  de blogger solo para comentar, pueden hacerlo en esta cuenta de Twitter

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